Phase of Darkness
Into The Light
Originally uploaded by Jessica New.
I hope my phase of darkness will be a story of past
To gain wisdom to enlighten my path
I'm knocked through the corners of life
To truly seek, it is not an easy climb
In anticipation for the best quality of me to remain in me
Living, it is not merely about existence
Creating the person within one self is a continuous fight
With such aspiration, I pray that I don't loose this sight
Sometimes darkness creeps on the vulnerable hearts
The battle is over
I put my resistance with all my soul might
Out of darkness into the light
Many thanks to flickr.com, the photo is by Jessica New - do click the photo to view more other collection.
posted by iamnasra at 9:33 PM
12 Comments:
I got this email and want keep it here from Patty who inspired me to write this poem.
Dear Nasra,
Thank you for your kind email message! I am glad my poem inspired
you to write yours.
Your poem was very perceptive and philosophical at the same time. It
evoked feelings of hope. I particularly liked this thought-provoking
passage:
"Living, it is not merely about existence- creating the person
within one self is a continuous fight"
Yes, isn't it?
Keep up the good work!
Patty
Nasra ... lovely poem for thought.
Know that the light is always there it is self that pulls the veil down and obscures our vision.
Just as the sun is always there beyond the clouds.
Hugs for you
:o)
lovely poem...I love this poetic darkness... I call her SHYAMALEE...
Hi Iamnasra!
I'm very glad I came here today. This poetic post inspired me to think deeper about life. Thanks.
Have a great weekendtime!
Very nice. This web of self we weave through life pays witness to both shadow and light.
There is truly a light at the end of a dark tunnel for us all....
Thank you for your poetry,
THANK YOU for using my photo & giving me credit!!
You made my day...
I think we make a good team.... LOL : )
nicely put
we are all on the same journey
(and sometimes the going is hard)
thank you
congratulations also to jessica
excellent shot
Excellent. Reminds me of my own quesr for light, and my own darkness!
powerful!
Your words are so poignant. It is a tough journey and sometimes the darkness sits on our shoulders for so long and hope is all we have to hang onto....but it is so worth it if we keep hanging on...be well Nasra.
Beautiful prose...you have a great ability in evoking great imagery with power...
nasra!! great indeed! :)
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