Sinking with Secrets
"Rumi speaks of the Open Secret. He says that each one of us is trying to hide a secret-not a big, bad secret, but a more subtle and pervasive one."
Source http://www.feminist.com/resources/artspeech/insp/opensecret.html
Th above is qouted from http://www.gettingunstuck.com/Film/Topic_Page/Secrets.htm
"Ocean of Secrets"
Do we dare to explore
What goes beyond that shore
To risk and take the chance
How far we'll advance
In reaching deep inside
To the mysteries that reside
Within your lonely heart
And the battles taken part
The struggles between right and wrong
The endless attempts to stay strong
Will we ever be able to reach out?
And get to know without a doubt
To reveal the secrets that you hold
The tales that never been told
Or we're gonna drown in your ocean
And get lost between chaos and confusion
Like those before who went astray
Trying to find your secret hideaway
By Hopeless Poet
Sinking in Secret
This guilt is clawing into me
I declared defeat, sinking to my death
Yet my soul is not left to die in peace
At this final moment, I have no tool to speak
This secret is a heavy agony to die with
A life time of waiting to submit the truth
The secret, shall I keep or release?
On the edge to cease without return
Two vowed to keep a secret
Though I was about to reveal,
But the secret is not only mine
So let me sink without breaking my oath of silence
2005, nasra al adawi
3 Comments:
i loved this poem by talentedpoet as well, very well written and it makes you feeeeel it.
The struggles between right and wrong
The endless attempts to stay strong
Will we ever be able to reach out?
And get to know without a doubt
To reveal the secrets that you hold
The tales that never been told
Or we're gonna drown in your ocean
And get lost between chaos and confusion
Well I don't know what to say! I really appreciate that you have posted my poem in your blog. It is an honor to me :)
About secrets, I agree with the quote specially about the secrets that are products of shame and guilt and those better be left as they are! Secrets! Most of them when being revealed they will mess up the life.
Najah:
Thanks for the nice comment about the poem :)
Wow I was still working on the secret...There Naj and Hopeless Poet
visiting my blog thank you so much......
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