Monday, August 20, 2007

~Im Weather In Your Hands~

Originally uploaded by Neville_S.

That flamed within a single kiss
Fire embracing fire
Twirling emotion
Birthing tornado
Hot and cold
Vibrating unimaginable storm
Then wind halts
Emotions breathing in and out
The twister inside dies
Leaving silence touching emptiness
Invisible air
Shapes drops rippling blank atmosphere
I'm all those in your arms

Copyright 2007 Nasra Al Adawi

Photo by Neville at


Blogger "Angeldust" said...


Sublime, dear Nasra.

Thank you for your visits this past few months, I really appreciated hearing form you - have not been this busy since 1994...
I think the whirwind spell is over for now and I am back to "normal" life.

best regards

Monday, August 20, 2007  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

we're all weather in the face of emotions. Nice work!

Tuesday, August 21, 2007  
Blogger Alok said...

lovely ....

loved the concept of "fire embracing fire"


Tuesday, August 21, 2007  
Blogger Janice Thomson said...

Excellent Nasra. Such a powerful build-up and delicate release...and so tastefully written. Love this piece.

Wednesday, August 22, 2007  
Blogger Lyrically speaking said...

A tender piece, beautiful

Thursday, August 23, 2007  
Blogger n2 said...

Your poetry pleasantly drew me back into that tornado, though I'm currently traveling miles away from my love.

Monday, August 27, 2007  
Blogger Ingrid U J said...

Your words are beautiful, feeds spirit...

It has been a wonderful experience to read you...

...Your poetry is like a rainbow of feelings painting the roads of my soul.

Nice, really nice work!


Wednesday, August 29, 2007  
Blogger starry nights said...

Just beautiful Nasra.

Friday, August 31, 2007  
Blogger priya said...

Just beautiful.

Thursday, September 13, 2007  
Blogger Lyrically speaking said...

waiting for a new poem :) missing your words of inspiration

Tuesday, September 18, 2007  
Blogger Kuan Gung said...

Very nice...

Tuesday, September 18, 2007  

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