~Im Weather In Your Hands~
Twister
Originally uploaded by Neville_S.
Ecstasy
That flamed within a single kiss
Fire embracing fire
Twirling emotion
Birthing tornado
Hot and cold
Vibrating unimaginable storm
Then wind halts
Emotions breathing in and out
The twister inside dies
Leaving silence touching emptiness
Invisible air
Shapes drops rippling blank atmosphere
I'm all those in your arms
Copyright 2007 Nasra Al Adawi
Photo by Neville at flickr.com
posted by iamnasra at 5:21 AM
11 Comments:
Allright!!!
Sublime, dear Nasra.
Thank you for your visits this past few months, I really appreciated hearing form you - have not been this busy since 1994...
I think the whirwind spell is over for now and I am back to "normal" life.
best regards
we're all weather in the face of emotions. Nice work!
lovely ....
loved the concept of "fire embracing fire"
alok
Excellent Nasra. Such a powerful build-up and delicate release...and so tastefully written. Love this piece.
A tender piece, beautiful
Your poetry pleasantly drew me back into that tornado, though I'm currently traveling miles away from my love.
Your words are beautiful, feeds spirit...
It has been a wonderful experience to read you...
...Your poetry is like a rainbow of feelings painting the roads of my soul.
Nice, really nice work!
Ingrid
Just beautiful Nasra.
Just beautiful.
waiting for a new poem :) missing your words of inspiration
Very nice...
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