I Surrender
I whispered to my soul to persuade my heart
Let it not fight love any longer as I have been searching for a long while
For so long waited for love-to take over me
Dissolving the tension of waiting,
Would cupid disapprove?
Here, I’m ready for love
I’m ready for passion
Lace my soul to this fulfillment
The flame of candles racing my desire
The moonlight, tuning this moment into fantasy
Walking into romance, I feel the burning of my heart
I’m surrounded with flowers,
Yet its more than that- it’s the melting into lovers touch-I require
My mind is tied in a candy wire
I would not resist, hypnotized- I feel I’m strapped in silk
Drowsy into its charms, I’m willing to take the risk
So wonderful, I’m tantalized
Beyond the hunger of food, I’m yearning for dinner of love
It begins with a kiss, I surrender all
A new morning, a new day, I’m still tucked under his embrace
Taken by the happiness, I have found love
6 Comments:
Really Nice .. i liked it ..
WOman in black
Asya
Sowhat
Thank you all for visiting my blog..I tend to foget about this blog..I should write more love poems
hi nasra, thank you for visiting my blog and leaving a comment, i hope you visit again.
i have just read one of your poems and i plan to read the rest now. mashallah you are talented.
it is so good to read the thoughts of a woman from the middle-east, a first for me.
Hullo, Nasra. Here I am returning the visit, dear. I have read all your poems here, all endearingly sweet and tender. My fave is the one entitled Passing Magical Moment -- what a wonderful read! (Ahh, for one so in love, it is. It surely is.) ^_^
I never got so many comments..Im bit thrilled..Gulnaz..we have great number of poetess over here..its only matters of discovering them..I think these type of blogs allow many to write..
Soulless
Im glad you like the my poem
I just got inspired the day when I wrote it
Wow, I really like this one. The shape and the feelings are very strong.
Keep feeling. Keep writing! Thanks for coming by Need Compass.
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