First droplet of rain
My hands touch
first droplet of rain
brings love to me
Pure droplets of bliss
gently falling
over my life
Invisible trail
all over my body
for it to linger- I wish
Pure droplets of bliss
gently falling
over my life
Invisible trail
all over my body
for it to linger- I wish
copyright 2005 nasra al adawi
posted by iamnasra at 8:23 AM
8 Comments:
as gulnaz had commented earlier it is pleasure to read the thoughts and feelings of someone from the gulf and especially when it is that of a woman....
I loved your 'Passing Magical Moment'...it was so tender and magical...I love mornings, particularly the beautiful dawns...so your poem touched a chord in me...
and last but not the least thank you for dropping by and allowing me to discover your blog....
thanks for visiting my blog.
hope u will keep on visiting :)
this poem is lovely
Gentle, sweet and precious , like rain, well captured.. Thank you for your comments and visit to my blog...
This is incredibly sensual and beautiful. It is a poem like this that I wish I was a woman, so that I could feel with such a feminine touch. Well done!
Anil
Thank you for taking the time
Well Im nt nly from the Gulf but also Im mixed as Im half African, so I hope not only represent UAE, Oman but Also Zanzibar
Hiba and Misreflection
Thanks for taking the time to visit my blog and I hope to see you too in my blog
Stan
Its really good to see you in my blog and Im too amazed that Im able to write about love..I would love to express more but Im so out of ideas when it comes to love
such a sweet, delicate poem.
for love to linger always. i hope it does for you.
Very delicate. Love the lines,
"Invisible trail
all over my body
for it to linger- I wish"
no comments, so cute.
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